Following to my below e-mail, please find attached my proposal and the dissertation layout with the first chapter. In addition, please refer to the below for the prof feedback in red about the first chapter.
Make the introduction more effective and get the correct century. In some areas you need to improve the grammar, see comments. Have more references on green marketing and consumer choice, companies now changing products. Also see my comment box on pre-empting the study. Also, the methodology in the introduction is too long, keep for chapter 3.
Please asking you to get back to me as soon as possible with the start-up procedure and if require we can have a zoom meeting.